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ThewonderfulBeijingHappyValleytripwillstartfrom“FjordForest".Hereyouwillseecolorfulglassairtrails,sparklingjoysquare,stylishparkgate,beautifulandinnocentjoytheater,andgreenwoods.Whataperfectcombinationoffashionandnature!
Itisanimportanttraffichubofthepark:busesandprivatecarsallstophere.Entertheparkandyoucanseethetransportweofferyou---theroundmini-trainofthe19thcentury.ThelongbatterycarwillletyousurftheHappyValley.FjordForestwillpresentyouromanticsprings,silentforest,andfreshecologicalexperience.Magicalarchitecture,simplecolorlines,andsimpleglassmetalscreatecertainmodernfeel.Whenwegothroughit,fashion,freshandmagicalfeelinggrowup,andourphysicalandmentalfatiguerelax.Let’sforgetrealityandpreparetothrowusintothelivelycarnivalatmosphere.
Itisknowntoeveryone:Oct,1stisourNationalDay.AtthisdayIwenttostreetandsawsomething.NowIwilltellyou!
At8:00Igotupandwentbusstationwithmymother.Omygodthereweresomanypeople!Withdifficultwegotupthebusandfeltverycrowed.Thetrafficwassobadtoo!Icostnearly1hourthatwearrivedthecenterofstreet.
Whatwereworsetherewereevenmorepeople!Inmyopinionitwasnotveryinterestingtocomeoutatthisday!NesttimeIprefertostayathomeandstudy!ThenightofTheNationalDayShanghaihasneverappealedtome.Citybornandcitybred,IvegottiredofthebrightnessofneonsignsandthegrandeurofskyscrapersinShanghai.
Ihaveagoodheavenandearth,therestofthereading,Iespeciallylikeit.Theeastwalloftheroom,thereisaonemetereightbytwometersbigbed,bedsets,thebedonaMickeyMousewithmewhenyougotosleepatnight,canletmeinthesteadfastontherest.Ihaveakilltwobirdswithonestonedesk,canputalotofreferencebooks,andwoulditbepossibleformetoread.Write,andcompletetheteacher'shomework.
Deskofsmokethereisalearningmachine,hecanhelpmetolearnEnglish,andasmokeputsomehandbook.Ihaveabigcupboard,thereisamoveinfrontofthegate,thecabinetdoorthereisfullofbeautifulthingsinmyclothes.Curtainwallthereisapinkwithyellowflowers,pulledthecurtainupandintheeveningcanblockthelightofthemoon,canthroughtothelightinthemorningdrewthecurtains.Ihavearoofabovelights,mercurial,canadjustmymood,itissurroundedbywhitelight,isformetolearn.
October1stisthenationaldayofourcountry.Thisyear,wehaveagoldenweekholidayforeightdays.
Besides,accordingtothenewrules,allhighwaysofourcountryarefreeofchargeduringtheeight-dayholiday.Therefore,manypeoplechooseself-drivingtour,whichexpectstosavemuchmoney.However,duringthesedayswecanseethatthesituationisnotasgoodasexpected.
Becauseofthehugetrafficflow,tensofthousandsofpeoplecatchtrafficjaminhighways,whichrarelyhappenedinthepast.
Besides,whentheygettothedestination,theyfindthattheyarecrowedwithpeople,whichmakestheirtripworse.FromTVorInternet,wecanseethatvisitorsofmostfamousscenicspotsarefarmorethanthemaximumcapacity.
Somepeopleevenfightwithothers.Inaddition,fromthisholiday,wecanseemanyissuesexistinginthemanagementofscenicspot.Themanagersdonotdogoodpreparationofthisholiday,andtheirattitudetowardsvisitorsshouldbechanged,especiallythosefamoustouristattraction.
Therefore,manychangesandimprovementsareexpectedtohappenafterthisweek,fromourgovernmenttovisitors.
NationalDayfinallycame,Itossaboutinbed.Setoffinhighspirits.Tothecampus,sawarowofneatteam,istheteacherarranged.
Ifthedaredevilgotlost.Weeachhaveasmallcaptain,eachsittinginacar.Atthetopofthemountainpark,thetimeflowslikewater.Afterhalfanhour,ourBteamarrived.SeetheC,ateamisalsoonthepoorDteam.
Westoodattheentrance,waitingfortheDteam.Afterawhile,oneofthestudentssaid:"theymaybeatrafficjam,wegotothe!"Monitorgasdonghonghongreplied:"thatisthebeststartingwith."Suddenly,thestudentstoodtherelikeanail.Thetwinklingofaneye,theDteamishere.Westeptogether,walkingtrail.Althoughitlookssimple,gotoknow,thisislikeatrampovermountainsandthroughravines.Walking,walking,climbing,climbing,andfinallytothetopofthemountain.
Weweretiredontheswingtheretorest,andsomestudentstopayayuanswing.Therestofuslater,smallcoasterbumpercarsandairplanes,childrensamusementpark,headflyingchair......Playsomuch,feelgoodmoodah!Wearetoday,laughingandplayingtogether.Althoughthisisaholiday,butwestillplaytogether.Itslikegivingusaninterestinglesson.
InthisshortholidayIrealizethetruth:andlikefriends,andlovedonestogether,weareonefamily,isalwaystheUnitedStatesandtheUnitedStates,withjoy.Nationaldaynomatterwhatisdoing,donothaveasmiletoliveit?